The 33 rd Law

Jay is a human being living on Eon, a planet billions of light years away from Earth that humans colonised after some scientists discovered a portal between Earth and this planet.But most of the Eonians (who look like humans only taller) refuse to live with Humans because on top of being foreigners they started developing new strange abilities.
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