Chancellor Office Reunion

So we all know the Star Wars prequels could have been so much better. Well I decided I could write a better love story than George Lucas did, and this is my attempt at it. Here you'll see I've only focused on scenes between Anakin and Padmé, and a few others I felt the dialogue could've been improved. I'm doing this because I loved the prequels when I was little, and I still do. I hope you enjoy! Please go read the original movie script of the scenes so you can get a good comparison. Comments and suggestions are welcome, I'd love to hear what you think. Thanks!