Shattered

Okay. I've been working on this plot a lot (rhyme in time), and I'm just really trying to find the perfect story. This starts out almost vague in that simple things happen and I can only hope to slowly get better. I don't know where I'll stop, but maybe when I feel it's accomplished. If you don't think so, just give me ideas and comment. Enjoy!

This is set around the second Bayverse movie so, again, hope you enjoy.