Good morning, good morning to you. (Chapter one)

Some days it seems like Scott just can't understand Ramona. She's like an enigma, unreadable to the naked eye. It seemed you would need to read minds just to know what to say or do, but he couldn't, so he thought he'd be confused forever...

...Wait, doesn't Wallace's boyfriend read minds?

(Note, i'm new to fanfic writing, only having written a few little paragraphs and bits of stories in the past, so take my writing skills with a grain of salt, but if you want to do a critique on my story, feel free.)