The Split (Chapter 1)

This is my first fanfiction, and Iid really appreciate some constructive criticism! Please don't be too harsh. I made this fanfic because I ADORED how the lion fell in love with the lamb and it made me ship them so hard! There aren't many mattshea fanfics out there, so that's one of the reasons why I made this! I'm new to writing, so any tips and tricks would be great. Thanks! ~Cureless