Change

She was my first, She was my last, She was my only, I will never love nobody else but her, and only her.
I could never love no one else as ruthless as her, no one as careless as her, never, never again.

This is my first real story that am actually serious about so please leave comments both negative and positive feedback and tell me how I can make it better for you guys.
If you think its good please like it and share it with others am really trying my best.

Thanks for even considering my book to read and I really hope you like it.