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This story was written for my creative writing class. It is about a mans experience going through Hell Week in Navy Seal boot camp! This is very different from what I usually write but I was inspired by a documentary I watched last summer about BUDs book camp so I thought "why not?!"
One of the main critiques I got in class on my last piece was that my character needed more emotion and feelings so I thought this subject matter would definitely help me expand on those important character traits!