1: Knocked In

Jak and Daxter: Retold! My favourite childhood game, now with a couple of badass girls to counter the sheer dumb luck and in-the-wrong-place-at-the-wrong-time-esque feel of the original heroes. These girls seem to have actual skill - and Thalia has a bow! Jak and Daxter are still there though, and the four of them will get up to all sorts of mischief. But Thalia and Koris have more to know about them than meets the eye...
(chapters 1 to like 13 are officially non-canon. i wrote them when i was eleven, and they suck balls. so go from "Prologue: Thalia and Koris" to start from the new and improved story.)
(I'm working on a new cover (bc I can kinda draw now!) but until then, the Google + PicMonkey one i made at age eleven will have to do.)