Alice's Angel

Young Alice ventures into a graveyard at night to prove an old wive's tale wrong, but littlw does she knows of what lays ahead of her.

I wrote this for Lit and Comp Honors in school this year as a vocabulary response to The Fall of the House of Usher by Edgar Allen Poe. This Story is only a page long (it is a short story) so please take like, two minutes out of your day to read and let me know what you think! :) Anything would be gladly accepted and I would appeciate any constructive advice! :) Thanks a bundle!
-Jess