Characters and setting of the excerpt

So this an excerpt from our English class and i would like to share this excerpt made by Marcelino Agana, jr.
So maybe youre thinking that I am copying his story, but actually no, I only want to share this story to everyone , because its a really nice excerpt.
I hope you will like Marcelino's excerpt.

This is also a kinda romantic and funny as well, but would actually learn a lesson from this.

No bad comments please