Ch.1 The Day Before

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It's has been months since Mini's four friends, Vanoss, Moo, Nogla, and Wildcat, disappeared after they visited a place called Fazbear's Pizzeria and the police are losing interest in the case. With the help of the manager of the pizzeria he decides to investigate the place. He goes into the pizzeria to answer one question, but ends up coming out with more questions.