Killing

Hannah a 16 year old girl who is done with life. After being beat up with parent's who don't really care she snaps. The thing she loves the most is killing. But after being saved by a boy named Jeff from being raped, her whole life might start changing. ( I am a sucky writer some times but please give me some suggestions on how I should fix it. And please tell me if you like it. Depending on how many people like it I will keep writing.)