First Meeting Part 1

Hello hello everybody!
This is my very first time writing a story and I hope you all will like it!!
It a Dave x Fem!John HomeStuck fan fiction.
Just to warn you that my grammar and vocabulary are both very horrible so I hope you guys would help pointing it out and help me.
Typos might be very common because I typing all these in my phone so please point it out too!
You are free to critique my story.Point out any mistakes you could find too.
No hate comments please.No shipping war either.This is my story and it will go my way.I apologise if you hate how I role play the characters.
I am not a very good roleplayer.
Lastly, happy reading~ ;)