Chapter 1: Mid-Scene Excerpt

Introduction to Readers
This 2,000-word excerpt from my sci-fi novel spans the second half of Chapter 1 and the first half of Chapter 2, set in a dynamic university. Larja, an astrophysicist professor, and Sarah, his PhD student and assistant, head from a lecture hall to Merian's office, where another professor supervises Sarah's thesis. Their interactions hint at cosmic stakes, but I'm seeking feedback on prose and language, how they flow, and whether they are natural and smooth. Please share your thoughts on writing style in the comments, avoiding plot or logic. For detailed critique or beta reading interest, comment or DM me! © Sam Lurian 2025, All Rights Reserved.