The Bookshelf

Short story I wrote about a woman named Hollie and her day at the bookstore.

Honestly it started out as an exercise to work on the following:
Tense - tried to keep it in the present tense which sounds simple, but I struggle with it
Mixing show and tell - I often have a hard time deciding which tool to use
Sentence structure -this one was the hardest for me, it's something I never tried to work on until now.
I hope you enjoy the story, and feel free to tell me what you think!