The story of Herobrine

Hi~! This is a sequel of "Herobrines daughter". If you liked the first book, you will love this one! I only own my characters such as Brin/Angel, Sky (NOT SKYDOESMINECRAFT), Kodan (new character), and Soul (blue-eyed enderman). Please give me some advice for how this book should go, and some nice comments would be good, too. Now, just sit back, relax, and enjoy the story! (I made the book cover)