Prologue Horse Taming Family

A story following the horse tamer's daughter on a roller coaster of emotions and betrayal as she navigates a war between two very different worlds. Will she be on the winning side of the war? Will her hatred for the opposing side stop her from falling in love? Will the companions she makes on the way betray her in the end? Or will she be the one to betray them? Only one way to find out.

This is my first draft of the book, and I am posting it here for feedback and suggestions on how to improve my writing.

TW: THERE IS MENTION OF SA, SEXUAL CONTENT, GORE, VIOLENCE IS A RECURRING THEME, AND OF COURSE FEMALE RAGE