Intro

Hello!! This is my first time writing a story so PLEASE give me constructive criticism or give me feedback of what I've done good! Again, first time writing so any mistakes please remind me and this story might take a while to complete! I think I've set myself a really hard goal since their story is REALLY complicated especially if you wanna add your own little bits/scenes into it but soon it will be completely different from the story line. THANK YOU