The beginning Mythos

This is the beginning of my next fantasy novel I want to publish let me know what you think. The story flips between the hero and the villain's point of view. This is a world full of hybrid human species and mythical beings along with my own creation of a mythos and pantheon of gods that rule the cosmos and created this world. The story follows an elves attempts to save the continent from ruin from the twisted a mutated beings of the desert kingdoms that seek to conquer all.