LAYING OUT THE STORY

Hello! This is a book that I'm currently writing, and I'm looking for feedback on how it's looking so far! I'll just be writing out random scenes and concepts, so please feel free to give criticism if you believe I've made a mistake on how things work! This IS a Greek book, and there IS LGBTQ+ couples in here, so if you try to tell me it's wrong, you WILL be blocked and reported, so consider this your warning!!! :]