First meeting?

Ha-neul, a bored South Korean girl who craves fun and action, and joon-woo, also a Korean boy who creates action and chaos anywhere he goes.
Ha-neul lays on her bed while playing with her phone when she got a notification.
„Let's meet up!"

(There's probably a lot of grammar mistakes but I'm just doing this cuz I'm bored 😭
I'm open to criticism and would be happy for any helpful tips tho)