Chapter one (sacred)

If you could can yall please comment thoughts and suggestions cuz i want to make a story yall want to read
Percy Jacksons soul is stripped away in a final act of loyalty to save those he loves. Will percy get his second chance at life
this is a chaos story but itĺl be far from cliche so no overpower army or betrayal or any loose plot.
also i will be updating AT LEAST once a week but most likely more and I wont leave this story hanging for weeks on end