The Night After Pomni's Arrival

I have no idea how to write a fanfiction, or how to write in general. I have a D in my writing class.
Creds to kyutsii_ on ig for the cover !!
I love Jax, with all my heart.
Also, Jax is a 4th wall breaker in this (Mostly because I love deadpool, and I kin Jax)
PLEASE tell me anything I can do to fix/help my writing!
This features Jax angst 😎😎
These aren't my characters, you can watch the show on yt! "The Amazing Digital Circus: Pilot" by Glitch :33