summary because I'm still working on the details

okay so this is my first fic and I really want opinions on it not really harsh or mean stuff but just good constructive criticism, anyway-
This fic was HEAVILY inspired by a creator I saw AO3. link here if you want to read for yourself I highly suggest it, it's amazing (so far it's not finished) but it's really great. https://archiveofourown.org/users/viveriveniversumvivusvici55/pseuds/viveriveniversumvivusvici55

anyway like I said it'll be my first but please enjoy<3