chap 1: All the care in the world. NOT. Haileys prospective

while not talking all her life, Hailey finds herself at her most venerable when the boy every girl likes, even her friend group, wants to help her break out of her shell. helping her find the truth about her friends, and to find the missing peace of the past.

main boy's name: This is like a POV. you can put said crush's name in place of Him.
Grammer: yes I know my grammar is bad, so please put a comment of what I can't spell better.
suggestions: If you have any suggestions to make the story better or want to add to a scene please make a comment