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HELLOOOOO! This is my first story so please give constructive feedback cuz I want my other stories to be better.
Now, Yes this is another Pokemon fanfic. Yes, it's worth reading. No, I'm not expecting to be the very best, but I hope y'all help me exceed my expectations.
This is after the Aim to be a Pokemon Master miniseries so I advise you to watch it if you haven't already.

After Ash resumes his carefree journey as Champion, he runs into many friends and enemies. He returns to Alola only to find another Guzzlord attack destroyed the Pokemon school. Filled with rage, he defeats the Guzzlords, but not without consequences. Join his friends in their search for Ash, before his sorrow consumes him.

Disclaimer: I don't own Pokemon