suggestions!!

smudge deserves a novella, though I don't expect the erins to give him that. I decided to show his life after firestar had left. please note, I haven't read EVERY book or super edition. I am aware there were encounters after this, but I may be unable to put them in with the correct timing or I haven't read about them yet. please inform me if there's any way I can improve my writing, or any suggestions you would hope to see though I won't get to all of them. I've been struggling with motivation lately so this won't be completed fast, it will take time as I'm trying to use this as a way to get myself out of my exhaustion. [I DO NOT OWN ANYTHING IN THIS NOVELLA, ALL CREDIT GOES TO THE CREATORS OF WARRIOR CATS.]