chapter 1 vlogging

A family of four(with powers) is being hunted by power hungry people and they have to move to the big cities and have adjusted with Japan life! Also this is my first time writing a story so if you would like to can you please give me tips on how to become a better writer and I want your honest feedback HAVE A GOOD DAY OR NIGHT!!
Sombertalk did help me on some parts of this story so pls follow sombertalk and read and vote her story's.