My New Version of "Jimbert: A Making Out Session"

I went on wattpad yesterday for the first time in a few years because I was looking for something I read a long time ago. Then I came across the collection of gems I wrote (including, but not limited to: Jimbert: a making out session). I quickly read through that story and decided that I could do better. So, about 7 hours later, I've come up with this fabulous composition. Enjoy!
Mind the grammar. ⚠️

P.S.- I was originally just going to make a revised version of "Jimbert: a making out session", but then I got a little carried Away and turned it into something better and longer with some fun details added in