The visitor

Hey there, this is my first ever story, usually i read stories and majority of them are only about girls which is frustrating considering the fact that i am a huge male navel fetishist, i read many stories related to the subject and then summerized my own with my own creativity intigrated in this piece of literature, this is first time I'm writing anything like this so please don't hate me, i know my grammer and story telling is amature, but i will continue to get better .