To Be a Screw Up

After her modeling dreams crumble, 18-year-old Nalu finds herself homeless and out of options. With nothing left but a single coin, she tosses it into a fountain, wishing for a fresh start. She never expects it to actually work.

In an instant, she's transported to a strange new world, one where women are rare, and fate has more in store for her than she ever imagined. As opportunities unfold, so does an unexpected twist: she doesn't just find love, she finds it four times over.

This keeps the essence of your original idea while making it more polished and engaging! Let me know if you'd like any tweaks.

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I will always take kind feedback and consider ideas for things in the story. I plan on this being a decently long one.