The Story's Beginning

This story is the same except it's my version of the movie why I would have done if I was in the movie silent voice let me know what you all think of it
Characters:
Nishimiya
New Character
Yuzuru
Shoya
Maria
Ueno
Miki Kawai
Shitoshi Mashiba
Sahara Miyoko
Nishimiya's Mom
Shimada Kazuke
Nagtsuka