Dark Side - Chapter 1 - A New Beginning

Sauli is a new kid to a massive school, everyone seems so nice to him. But this mysterious guy, he needs to find more about him, with his eyeliner and trench coat, with different colored eyes. Brendon seems like a nice guy, but what he doesn't know, what he fears the most to happen again.
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Everything is from Sauli's point of view. And in the school, many many students and even teachers are against homosexuals. I do not mean to offend. I am with equal rights completely. I get some 'wtf' from people because I'm so big on equal rights for the LGBT community. And for equal rights on men and women. Equal rights for all!!
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