Edge Of Desire...

Author's note:
Okay I don't know why it's rated PG 13 O_O but this is just a short story i made up as i started typing, so I hope it's not bad as I think it is (._.), I guess you can say I like to criticize my own work, meaning I hate anything I write or I don't think its good enough. But people apparently 'Like' my writing, and i'm not too fond of people complimenting it. :/ *sigh*. P.s My laptop is messed up so it leaves out certain words ...mostly the letter 'S' -____- I apologize before hand.