Introduction

This is my first time writing a story, for now I'm just testing my writing ability before I continue to write more stories.

Please do give me feedback as to what I need to change to make my writing better and more efficient.

George Lore, a talented musician graduates from his 4 year university in hopes to form a band and become a worldwide sensation in the music industry.

Wilbur Soot, a very talented musician and song writer, gets kicked out from his previous band and has been on the hunt for a newer and innovative band.

What will happen when the two boys meet? Will George alow this Wilbur to join his band?

Keep reading to find out...