Eye of the Serpent

This is a re-write of my first short story. I had read it again a while back and realized that it could be so much better. While some of the elements of the story stayed the same, there are many improvements/updates that were made.

Inspired by the Fossil Fighters trilogy of games for the Nintendo DS, the story follows a teenage velociraptor named Sora as he deals with a newcomer that his humans bring to the house. The new resident begins growing at an alarming rate and quickly becomes too dangerous to keep around. Will Sora be able to get this pest out of his house before it hurts his family?