The day he left me

Hi guys! Once again this is another short story I created for a school assignment. I would love to expand on this story so please vote and comment as I would love some feedback!

The story is one page long but I hope you enjoy it!

I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead. Its peaceful; calming like the shade of blue, unlike the storm brewing in my mind as I open my eyes once again. The sky was different today. Some might think it's a good thing, bright blue littered with the suns glimmering rase, it was everything but...

Follow the story of Faye and James in this short story