Darkness with some yellow

This is a Dayshift at freddy's fanfiction. Half improvised, half planned.
I'm trying to keep up the 3rd person view in it because the point of view switches would be confusing, right?
About the "book" it self:
It's mostly about Jack getting to understand himself, his actions and his emotions.
But he has Dave by his side so, that may help.
The book will have its Davesport moments, but I will try not to make things too cheesy. Rather psycologically emotional.
I made my own rules into my own fiction about soul matter. Tried to compleate some "plot holes" Direct doggo left. I'll try not to take things too far with them.

Also some warnings:

Drugs, alcohol, doubting self worth, mentions of selfharm and suicide