The Roof

I had to write a one act play for class and I really liked it and wanted to share it. I really relate to the main character and had a similar experience, so please be nice. Also, I've been debating on whether or not to add more acts and make it longer. Please give me feed back. I love this story and would love to know what you think.

Tristan is a nineteen year old transgender male that struggles with acceptance. After hearing one to many hurtful words from his own sister, he is found standing on the edge of a roof by his best friend and cousin.