Chapter 1-Edited

This is my very first time writing and I have not had the chance to read CL Stone's books but I have read many fanfictions based on the Blackbourne and Toma teams. Please let me know if I got descriptions or personalities wrong, I am still learning.

Can the Blackbourne team and Toma team help Rose Morgan overcome her past or will her secrets be too much for them to show her the meaning of real love?