Chapter 1. Help...

This thing I've written is just something I do in my free time. Nobody IRL has read this thing and I know it will be cringy. This is also the first story I show the world! If you decide to read the story and think there is something that I could do to make the writing better, I would really appreciate it if you'd tell me in the comments.
*HERE IS A THOUGHT THOUGH!!! SIMON IS NOT THAT RELEVANT IN THIS STORY/AU!!!*