It's Happening

I'm sorry if this is terrible. Most likely I'm going to continue this but I just wanted to put this out there first. I'm not sure how I feel about it. I guess let me know what you think and if there is anything I should change for later.
Edit: hi im writing this in 2017 now and i know i said that i would finish it, but im not. im 17 now and have grown out of homestuck so i guess enjoy this for what it is