Tears Don't Erase Scars

This is a short story. Elise is going through some tough stuff in life right about now. She is a perfectionist and finally cracks. She finds her outlet by cutting herself, but by the end she is disgusted with herself even more. She makes 3 promises at the end that will influence her choices and change her life. New people come in as old ones fade out. She changes her attitude and outlook on life. Don't let anyone know and you are fine. What do you think?