Chapter 1 (rewritten)

Today was a normal day in Konoha. Everything was quiet and the sun was shining.

Two guards were taking the first round around the village. As they were walking they came to a halt, a little girl was lying on the ground.

They both rushed to her side. When they came closer to her they stopped, her hair... it was pink.

''Hey, are you okey?'' one of them asked. She didn't move. The one that asked that felt for her heart beet. It was there but very faint. He took her into his arms and both guards went to the hospital.