How It Started

A tyrannical king, an overthrown kingdom and the hunger for power. What could possibly go wrong. Cassian rules over Alfhame with the help of his best friend and most noble companion, Lorcan, and his ruthless mother, Elora, but there's trouble brewing for our king: betrayal, uprisings and misfortune await him. Cassian demands power and is willing to do anything to get just that. To what lengths will he go to get what he wants.

*snippets for a book I am writing. I'm just starting out and would like some feedback.