A life without love

I sometimes write poetry. (who would've guessed)
This is pretty personal so no hate please! But of course I'm always open for feedback and constructive critisism. Y'all can also tell what parts you would have written differnetly and stuff like that.
Thanks, really appreciate it :)

(I mostly write in English but I might throw in the occasional German poem. Don't know yet.)

(Also: I don't update that often so I'm sorry...)