ch 1, this girl

again here's a redo, all I have is just my memory to back these up so yeah,

dear rachel was a very cold hearted girl, she felt nothing towards her peers and had nothing to offer, she always wonders around alone and never really has had any friends, and she likes it that way, she's always been that way and her parents have never cared, they are always work and only need to worry about her health and make sure she's going to school, so her life goes on, however it all changes when one night on her way home a mysterious man takes an eye for her, and decides he's going to take her, and it would seem she doesn't mind...