Chapter One (I'm Not Gonna Do Chapter Names Unless You Guys Want Me To)

(This Is A ReWrite Of My Old Story "Ashen Haze", Some What Improved, But Basically The Same Story, Although I've Written A Crap Tonne More. This Book Started Out As A Hard-Copy Manuscript, And I've Recently Been Typing It Up, It Was Six A4 Pages Of Absolutely Crap Handwriting, The First Page Was The Entire First Chapter All 960... Something. My Handwriting Is Tiny And Horrible.)