तुम्हारी याद

This is my first try in writing hindi poem (and hindi is not my mother tongue). I wrote this poem a long back. It is partly a Twilight fan fic poem. I tried to bring out Bella's feeling when Edward leaves her in the 'New Moon'. Please read and comment. Critiques are most welcome. And please don't try to translate it google and read. It changes the entire meaning and is horrible.