The Great Beyond Part 1

I wrote this story for school. It was supposed to be a short story at about 500 to 700 words, but now it's over 2400.. Still, I think it turned out alright :).

The story is about Lucy who gets into an accident and then wakes up in another world. Here she meets a lovely little girl called Faith and the performer Eddie. Soon she finds out the reason she is there and her way back.